The story has been moved to the blog section for purposes of future editing and re-writing (edits currently expire after 90 days in this section).

Sorry for the inconvenience and thanks once again to all for reading and sharing your thoughts.

As smooth as a silk.

I'd lost in translation.

Nice piece of work keep it up

~Bir

Amber, Bhakunde Bhut, Dave Chappelle, Latoboy, Npl2us, Birbhadra: Thank you for your comments.

Thanks also to the silent readers and those commenting in the blog section and via Sajha mail.

WOW, Loved this peice like many others by you. I was hoping to read more but I see Chapter 4 has not been appended yet. Eagerly waiting for more.. Please post the next  one asap:D

Gazer, I left this piece for another day.  Waiting to read till you'd finished it, but seeing all the positive comments here, just made me bite the bullet.  And damn, it was awesome!  You, Galt, sum_off and a few others make reading your stories so easy to go along with, and the way you get me so engrossed into it until I've finished the entire article (not even picking up my phone as it rings) just leaves me to believe that you'd do great if all your works were taken mainstream someday.  Ever since Miss Sajha, I've been hooked!

hahahah and this excerpt cracked me up...I always thought the opposite happened bro.  Girls, IMHO like the reverse psychology crap: "She did not fully know what she wanted but she had a clear idea of what she did not want. She did not want those boys who got drunk and fought in Nepali  parties. She did not want show-offs who could not stop boasting about themselves or their families. She disliked those who spoke loudly and put others down. She wanted someone who would respect her and treat her as an equal."  LMAO

And bro, this was my math teacher in school I kid you not...The details are astoundingly similar: "Besides, it did not help that the Nepali teacher was the worst-dressed and most unrepresentable of all the teachers. He had hair creeping out of his nose and growing on his ear lobes".  hhahahahahahaha

Once again, thanx for the wonderful read...Waiting for the remainder of Part 3 (and Part 4 if any).

well, i can not comment on such a nicely written story as i can never imagine to write such a nice story.  very well written, thoroughlly enjoyed and eagerly waiting for remaining parts.  I also like the characters in this story.  they all  are positive and doing well, which is really good.