Gazer,

I am familiar with those characters. You are so honest with the characters that their depiction is so down to the earth. However, your perception, keen observation and beautiful rendering of words has made this piece a  colorful and interesting read.  I like your way of building up the story introducing the characters inside out before bringing them into the checkerboard. This preface promises an interesting drama to follow.

SunnyDev

PS. Your memoir was good. I liked it.