I am not great in reading and writing but surely this story has some 'thing'  in it. I can smell honesty, naiveness, and an expression of true feeling.

Annehathway does seem to be fascinated with this magnificient piece from Spiritual. I wonder why,  anne is going deep  analyzing each phrases and somehow trying to relate it to her own life(just a guess). It seems the story (as it should turn) might have reminded her of her own past experiences( which she might be in a position of self-denial). And as her comment goes she wishes the story to go according to her way, a way she prefers, a way that would make her feel comfortable.

Anyways, lot of analysis from my point.

kepp your spirits high and go on with your story.