Ek chhoti si kahani ( True story )

Spiritual bro story is going well.... तर लास्ताँ यस्तरी कुद्यो कि बैकुण्ठ मानन्धर के कुद्थे होला र...... पहिलो भेट मै किस ....... अब क्लाइमेक्समा कता कता बाट "चट्याङ्ग" आवाज आउने होला अनि त्यो पुरानो गल्लि को हिलोमा सिलित्त चिप्लेर गोबरमा हात परेर झसन्नग भा जस्तै झस्किने होला .... अनि हेत्तेरी सपना पो रैछ... भन्ने होला ..... ल अर्को भाग राखम ....

Tyo sabai chumman ko kura mero sapana matra thiyo. Jasari film ma sapana dekheko dekhauchha ni exactly same. Saayad mero bhitra aatma dekhi nai uslai maan parayera hola, ma yeti chado teha samma dubna puge....... To be continued

spritual, waiting for your next post...

I want to make this long story into short. Things were going smoothly. We were talking on phone daily basis and meeting in person sometimes here and there. To be honest, our relationship wasn't going to fast space as thought it would go. We were neither in only friend relationship nor completely boyfriend girlfriend relationship. I think it was her, who was talking extra time to get to know each other more. As I had already mentioned earlier that we were in the process of going to USA for further study. We both applied for student visa, and both of us got it. Unfortunately we were going to two different states for personal reason. She was going to New York while I was going to Wisconsin. We were so excited to go to USA. New place, new hope, new people. We were so overwhelmed by the thought to land into new place so called dream land. Finally, we both landed in USA. She was week ahead of me. We both started to talk on the phone for hours. We used to share the new experiences, compare Nepal and USA and so on.... Things were going fine. But after two months later..........

After two months later ......???

I think we were busy trying to sort out our overwhelming surprises given by usa. I was so entangled with so many things as most of the freshers face it off. Like driving license, SSN, managing tuition fee for next semester, transferring to cheaper community college and so on... After two months I noticed that we were not talking to each other like before. I wasn't paying that much attention about. We were hardly talking 2, 3 mins in a day or sometimes we didn't talk for like 4,5 days straight. Then at one point I realized that something is missing out. Now I decided to pay attention in or relationship and make it strong. I tried to call her everyday. But somewhere I started getting cold vibes from her. I noticed her making excuses to get away from me and trying to make the conversation stop. Seems like she is not interested at all to talk to me.......

Could you please raise your hand, if you are reading this story? I want to see the numbers of reader so that I feel that there's still people want to continue it.

spritual bro, keep continuing your spirit....

You are no more than bad Hindi serial bro, now you are loosing interest. I loved your story's first part, 10/10, second is 8/10 , third 6/10 . Your first part was two years ago and still you have not finished your story.You put few lines in months and ask us to raise our hand. well I raise my hand, now get your writing going on otherwise your story will be getting negative marks.The last part has lost my interest , still I will give you one more chance. Then I will see if you are worthy for my 5 minute reading and 10 min commenting ;-)

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Antim ma maile uslai sodhe, k timi aru kasailai maan parauchhau? Usle bhanyo ho. Ma chhanga bata khase jasto bhayo. Ma chhatpatauna thale, ma runa khale. Ani maile prasna gare kina kina kina??? Yesto gareko... U chupchap basi rakhyo. Ma phone ma barbaraudai thiye, maile k k bhane k k sodhe ma aafailai thaha chhaina. Antimma usle kehi jawaf nadi sorry bhanera phone rakhi diyo. Tespachhi Ko jiwan mero kasto bhayo hola kalpana garnuhos tapaiharu pani. Ma haasna birse. Meri jindagi ujad lagna thalyo. Sapanima pani u matrai auna thalyo. Mero jindagima kehi rash nai bhayena. Tara malai thaha thiyo show must go on. Ma jeudai gaye bina rash ko jindagi. Maile 3,4 mahina pachhi thaha paye, who she is dating with bhanera. Keta ma bhanda ramro rahechha harek dhristikorn bata. Malai aaba uttar chahiyena ayushma le kina yesto nirnaya liyeko bhanera. Last edited: 11-Aug-16 02:33 PM

6 months later I got the call from unknown number. I said, " who is this? Ma AYUSHMA Last edited: 03-Jan-17 06:13 PM

Then???