Ranipari,

Thanks for visiting, it really means a lot to me when you choose to read not only the story but also my comment. But in all honesty, I need to improvise, and that is what I am telling to ‘myself’, not to others. Each time I post something in sajha, I find numerous flaws when I read it again, and that is my frustration, nothing else.

28^th Amendment,

I read my reply once again and felt a little bad about it. It sounded more like sarcasm when it was actually not. I am honestly very thankful that you pointed out few redundant details I could have done without. And I sincerely wish everyone did so too. So thank you from the bottom of my heart. I seek such inputs from readers every time I post something. And no, I wasn’t thinking about stopping at the point when she gets off the bike, quite honestly I would have stopped it right there if I had been a little careful. Majority of the readers in sajha are mature enough to understand what is implied. However, I still want to reiterate my haste to post and a little eccentricity I seriously need to work on.