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 कबिता लेखन मन लाग्यो ।।
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Posted on 12-22-07 3:34 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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लौ  मेरा केही  कबिता हरु




 
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लौ अर्को  कबिता 




 
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अर्को  कबिता




 
Posted on 12-22-07 9:29 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Alujastoji  asadhye ramro kabita

malai man pareko lines haru --

yi akha magyou timile akhaima basae tara nani mai bijhayu....

ani, naghera sima sara rahar aksincha ...... 

keep posting!


 
Posted on 12-22-07 9:35 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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आलु जस्तो जि,
कबिता हरु राम्रो छन। सरल भाषा तर बलिया भावहरु पस्किनु भएको छ। अरु पनि छन भने टास्नुस, पढ्ने काम हाम्रो भयो।

 
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आलु जस्तो भन्दीने पेडा जस्तो लेखने....भएन नि हो यस्तो त :)


 
Posted on 12-23-07 9:14 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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thanks you all .. I used to write poem when I was very young .. these are the poem I wrote when I left Nepal .. :)

here goes more




 
Posted on 12-23-07 9:54 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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आलु जस्तो,
कबिता त राम्रै छ। तर केही अरु शब्दहरु सङ खेले अझै राम्रो बन्ने छांट देख्छु।

मनमा लागेका केही कुराहरु:

"म सुन्छु तर यो मन को आवाज" लाइ "म सुन्छु तर त्यो मन को आवाज" बनाए कसो होला?
>> आफ्नो मनको आवाज सुन्न त्यती गारो हुन्न होला, जति गारो अरुको मनको सुन्न हुन्छ।


"तिम्रो मौनतानै सङीत मेरो
त्यो नगिचपना मै सङीत मेरो"
लाइ
"तिम्रो मौनता नै सङीत मेरो
आखा को भाखा नै गीत मेरो" बनाए कसो होला?
>> सायद कबिताको बहाब अझ  राम्रो हुने थ्यो कि?


 


 
Posted on 12-23-07 10:07 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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thank you "Nepal ko Chora" ..

म सुन्छु तर यो मन को आवाज" लाइ "म सुन्छु तर त्यो मन को आवाज" बनाए कसो होला?
>> आफ्नो मनको आवाज सुन्न त्यती गारो हुन्न होला, जति गारो अरुको मनको सुन्न हुन्छ।

..... Typo ..
यो should be त्यो.. it was a typing mistake ..

"तिम्रो मौनतानै सङीत मेरो
त्यो नगिचपना मै सङीत मेरो"
लाइ
"तिम्रो मौनता नै सङीत मेरो
आखा को भाखा नै गीत मेरो" बनाए कसो होला?

.. yeah ... thanks for the suggestion .. it makes more sense now .. :)




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Last edited: 23-Dec-07 10:07 AM

 
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haha kishnakale ji hansaunu bhayo,

tyahi ta aalu jasto ji, naam anusaar bhayena ni, kabita ta nikkai ramro lekhnu hundo rahecha..


 
Posted on 12-23-07 2:15 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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If only it was written in English...
 


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