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Posted on 03-19-16 10:45 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Here is our new short film.
Do give us your feedback/criticism and share if you loved it.

https://youtu.be/JnzJ0g5m8jY


 
Posted on 03-20-16 12:30 PM     [Snapshot: 183]     Reply [Subscribe]
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In case you missed it.
 
Posted on 03-22-16 11:57 AM     [Snapshot: 373]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Guys feedback is much appreciated. Thank you.
 
Posted on 03-24-16 2:45 PM     [Snapshot: 564]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nice movie. Good concept. Keep up the good work. Keep posting.
 
Posted on 03-26-16 6:59 PM     [Snapshot: 757]     Reply [Subscribe]
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सबैको अभिनय राम्रो छ I Gives a good message to mankind. Loved to watch.
 
Posted on 03-27-16 2:29 PM     [Snapshot: 909]     Reply [Subscribe]
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@Shrestha8:

Its nicely done short film.

+tive:
Acting is natural
Cinematography & Sound are decent.
Editing is crisp

-tive:
Screen direction (when boss & main actor are talking at boss office from 02:35, their screen direction keep changing. For example, during this scene, sometimes your main actor is on right side of the screen and sometime left, you should not change screen direction within a scene, please research more about screen direction.

Dialogue: I prefer less dialogue and more visual but that could be just me. In future, you may want to research more about the real conversation at that situation, when boss and actor are talking, their dialogue has no impact. Boss could have asked about specific project rather than just how are you and why you are late conversation.

Cutaways/insert shot vs self dialogue: in pre-dating scene in office, when main actor keeps saying 'oh its 4:30 already, of its nearly 8:00 pm' etc, you could have used insert of a wall clock and have actor's reaction to that. I think that would have more effective.

With limited location and actors, you have done great job. Keep it up.

Sakumaku
Last edited: 27-Mar-16 02:30 PM

 
Posted on 03-29-16 9:51 AM     [Snapshot: 1113]     Reply [Subscribe]
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What is the movie trying to show?
 
Posted on 03-31-16 1:39 PM     [Snapshot: 1259]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thank you all for feed back.
Sakumaku thank you for ur constructive criticism. Yes we had couple of camera angels will keep that in mind next time. Others it was the structure to give Samaya the character tht story tells. We had thought abt the clock but thought it would not connect well with latter scene where he frequently counts time. The story is more about time management.
Wonton, please watch it again with the subtitle/CC. That should help understand.
 
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I do not know about technical aspects of film making but I can tell visuals are not eye catching.

Dialogues are not good and unnecessary at times.

You should take someone who can act -

Lead character's body language and dialogue delivery is not good.

what is this movie about - अनि लास्ट मा भाको छै के हो
 
Posted on 03-31-16 3:27 PM     [Snapshot: 1322]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Even i did not understand. I hope he does not tell you to watch again.

 
Posted on 03-31-16 4:51 PM     [Snapshot: 1364]     Reply [Subscribe]
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It's difficult to understand what the movie is trying to say. At the end of the movie, it becomes unclear what the main idea is. The guy at the end moves to a different psychological plane with that white background and it becomes unclear what the movie is about!
 
Posted on 04-01-16 7:34 AM     [Snapshot: 1481]     Reply [Subscribe]
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I think it's a well done movie with symbolism. I'm not going to comment on the technical aspects like audio, video quality and special effects as I don't know anything about them. For me, the only thing that could use some improvement is acting. For some reason, the acting in the movie seemed a bit forced or unnatural at times. But other than that, the movie does a good job conveying an important message.

This movie could serve as wake-up call to modern day society. In today's busy world, we seem to be so engrossed in catching up with time that we forget to live, and enjoy life. We can get so focussed on building a future that we overlook and miss out on the present. We might rush to the future (like the lead actor Samay does by counting time fast) only to realize that the future is empty (because Samay missed out on the present). I like that how Samay has an epiphany before it's too late and he goes back in the present, hopefully to live in the present joyfully with his loved ones.
 
Posted on 04-01-16 11:11 AM     [Snapshot: 1529]     Reply [Subscribe]
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nepal ma jasto bhako..afu producer afu director bhaye pachi..acting aaos naaos afai acting garna khojeko..ani ramro huni film pani naramro banako..keti ko acting natural cha..kta ra boss ko ta khattamai cha...suru ma ramilo thiyo..last ma kotha bhitra purara sidhara tai na tui,,kei bujhena yo sojho dimag le
 
Posted on 04-01-16 12:08 PM     [Snapshot: 1554]     Reply [Subscribe]
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@wonton - may he was like - I want to make a movie - it will be very difficult to understand so that people have to see multiple times and read subtitles and even they will not understand - may be it is his trick to increase the no of views lol - you never know.
 
Posted on 04-03-16 1:48 PM     [Snapshot: 1694]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Guys thanks for feed back. This helped to understand the audience. Sorry that most people did not get it. To understand more please read Mily's post above. Thank you Mily for the feed back. Will certainly come with better film next time. Cheers n have a great day y'all
 


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