Thank you all for feed back.
Sakumaku thank you for ur constructive criticism. Yes we had couple of camera angels will keep that in mind next time. Others it was the structure to give Samaya the character tht story tells. We had thought abt the clock but thought it would not connect well with latter scene where he frequently counts time. The story is more about time management.
Wonton, please watch it again with the subtitle/CC. That should help understand.