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Posted on 11-08-04 6:34 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Here it goes:

रक्सि चुरोट नखा भन्थ्यो बुढा पाकाले
धुम्रपानमा तक्मा पायो हाम्रो काकाले

माछि मार न हो माछि मार न
हाम्रो काका आइपुग्यो तमाखु भर न

पानि मुनि पानि माथि पुतलिको छाँया
बाइकी आमाको भन्दा पनि तमाखुको माँया

माछि मार न हो माछि मार न
हाम्रो काका आइपुग्यो तमाखु भर न

माछि मार न हो माछि मार न
हाम्रो काका आइपुग्यो तमाखु भर न

हस् त दाइ धन्यबाद!

 
Posted on 11-08-04 1:50 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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and how is this a haiku?
 
Posted on 11-08-04 4:08 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Bhinaju, Nice Haiku!
The upper 2 lines are sufficient in my view.

रक्सि चुरोट
नखा भन्थ्यो ni Hai
बुढा पाकाले

धुम्रपानमा
तक्मा पायो lau
हाम्रो काकाले



le chef du nuit ,
Originally Haikus are short poems with three lines and with 5 letters in the first line, 7 letters in the second line and 5 letters in the 3rd line.
When it extended to other countries from Japan it slightly changed.

In English they may not strictly follow the rule of 5-7-5.

In case of Nepal we have Muktaks that resembles with Haiku (Of course but not the same).

If you sing this song short and short form like a Haiku,
It resembles with Haiku. Obviuosly it doesn't follow the rule of 5-7-5.
 
Posted on 11-08-04 8:02 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I add mine too:


Friday

Changaa sari bho
Aaaja yo mero man
Haatma Dhan

Saturday
Bihana bhari
Suteki chheu he pari
Hunna yasari

Monday

Haat ra khutta
kampna thalyo lau mero
Bill tirdaima

Rest 4 days are left for other friends to add.
 
Posted on 11-08-04 11:41 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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tuesday

alarm le oothayo
snooze hajar choti thichhay
aba mc ka paun
:-)
 
Posted on 11-09-04 5:30 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Teeharko Haiku

भेलेनी आइन् ५
आगन गुन्यु चोलो ७
मागान लौ न । ५

हे औँसी बार ५
गाइ तिहार भेलो ७
हे औँसी बार । ५
 


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