It feels both really good and bad when you fall in love. Cause love is there to make u fell good and when u fall its always going to hurt even if it is in love. I have the bitterest experience of my life and I am going to share it over here….

 

It was the winter of 1998 december, u know when we used to have meen pacahs ko chutti. I used to play cricket with my frens all the day long. There was a house near my house which had been sold a long time ago but new owners were not seen till then. That winter the owners came to live there along with there cute daughter shreya…since we were boys and that girl used to come in the roof everyday to see us play my frens started getting excited and started making noise doing all those funny stuffs to get her attention, I was not that interested…hold on c is no the one un my life. After few days I saw another gal with her who was really beautiful and simple..things went on like that all winter. Both of them were there watching us n we were playing. Shreya sent a note to my best fren Tope saying please don’t harass them and we backed off. Things were going like that when one day we saw them waving me n Tope bye. It was feb 28 1998. We knew that they used to study in Darjeeling so we thought ok let it be… nothing changed and life went on for one more year and here was December 1999.

 

They were there again looking at us playing cricket. Shreya started pursuing my fren tope n there relationship started blooming. They used to talk in phone look at each other from roof send letters and cards.. But never met as both of them were afraid of their parents. My another fren lure started liking another girl. Her name was anjali and was cousion of shreya . we got all our info from their brother who played cricket with our smaller brother. She used to come their every once in a while.Lure took me along side of him to follow that girl .look at her in the roof. He was there doing all those stuffs and I was by the side of him just lost in my self doing stuff. And in February the gals asked for phone number of tope through another fren. But he gave them phone number of lure. And in feb 3 1999 they called fot the first time. All of us were excited what are they gonna tell. Tope was talking to shreya first time so he was excited, lure was also excited to talk with anjali and I was excited to know what will go on. We were talking and when lure started talking with anjali she told him it wasnot him c wanted to talk but it was me. He was disappointed and I was confused why c wanted to talk to me. When I talked to her c said c likes me and confessed her feelings for me.. I did not know what to say so I gave her my home phone number and left. From that night on wards c was calling me regulary. My sisters came to know my mom came to know. They were keeping silent that time. She sent me gift and wished me best of luck for my test exam before slc. She even sent me gift in valentines day . That was first ever valentine gift of my life I rembere that valentine cos shivaratri was also same day. But just after valentines day c left for Darjeeling a few days earlier than shreya. I was feeling kind of lost empty and sad inside but I did not know it was love or sth else. One day tope called me n said he got letter frm them frm Darjeeling. Since it was 1^st april I did not believe it. But it was real so we also started sending them letters since there were no emails readily available at that time. I was waiting eagerly for dec 2000.

 

 

 

 

And December was here but there was no trace of shreya or anjali. We were wondering what went wrong . One day I got call from anjali that c is in her sisters home and shreya is not coming this winter cos she had slc that year. She came to shreyas house and we looked at each other s usual from roof  and talked to eachother through phone. Everyone in my family knew about this and my mon and oldest sister were angry cos they though it was too early for me to get involve in love. I was in my 11 grade. So winter holidays of meen pachas were no more ther. She used to wait for me all day long in the roof and I used to come running frm my college just to have more glimpses of her. Even I used to curse god for making days so shorter in winter cos it was dark by 5.30-6. But her roof and my rrom were facing each other in same level so c was there in roof in those cold nights just looking at me n I was there studying all the time and looking at her every once in a while. then we had not meet each other . One day c called me and asked if we could meet. I was so excited. We met for the first time in 8^th December 2000 more than a year after the relation ship beginning.. and what was the first thing I did u know when I met her.. u wont believe it but I measured my height with her cos c was slim and looked really tall but for my luck c was a bit shorter than me..we talked and walked side by side but none of dared to look eacth other in the face,, and this valentine c called me to meet her again… and I was walking with her at night I met my mom and c asked me to go home..i was so afraid hahahaaa… but c never mentioned about that in home.. I had a kinectic Honda at that time but no licnece.. but even I used to go to meet her at her sistes home which was in patan….and the day was there when c had to leave for the Darjeeling 29^th feb 2000. I had to lie both in college and home to get early leave from the college so that I can go to drop her off in the bus park. I called my cousion brother to take me to her house and to bus park. He agreed and we were following her taxi from patan to gongabu bus park since c had her family members with her…and for my luck c was left alone inside bus for half an hour so I went inside there and talked to  her. I put my shades on so she could not see my misty eyes. And c was facing towards window to hide her tears.. and I said her bye and c told me that c was not coming back next  year as she had her SLC exam. I became really upset to know that I was not going to c her for next two years..I came home lost.. confused sad…n depressed…

If u like it its going to continue if not its gonna end like my first love  

simple, beautiful and at parts really funny..esp this one.. (since we were boys and that girl used to come in the roof everyday to see us play my frens started getting excited and started making noise doing all those funny stuffs to get her attention, I was not that interested…hold on c is no the one un my life.)

only few people dare to write what they feel... u did exactly that teroobaau....and the details were fantastic..... what's next?

ok nice one...will be waiting for the shattering part.... good work..just be careful while typing cos letters were her en there...above all it seems true tale of love..

mero katha mero geet..... sajha ko aarko form hahahaa............hoina yii keti haru le matra nai dhoka dincha jasto cha love story ma... mauka chopne haru....ani cybro timi mero bro hau mero nam pani cybertronx ho ..mela ma chuttieko jasto chau  ni....

This story looks very true and natural. wanderful  job. inspite of some Typo's your expressions are wanderful. i am sure many ppl had there flash backs, i guess most of the love stories in Nepal at that time started like that only some had a happy ending fortunately i was one of them but even then i am suffering i just had a fight with him few hours ago but i guess thats part of life. Then what happened on 2002......waiting.....

So, whats happening at the moment. Its already passed 8 years now. Emails. chatting , or ....nothing..

teroobau

What happened next?

Your story sounds so honest, simple and heart touching. We need people like u in this world bro.

God bless you man.

i am drawn here by love story and what i come to get is one fool looking for similar name and calling me bro..
concentrate at love story above man not my name... m waiting for the next part...

yah the story touched my heart true...and i believe this guy truly loved that gal as he still remebers all the date which is rare in itself too... the gal must be realy lucky to get this guy n as far as story goes guy also seem lucky to have gal like that. so when she shatters her and why? I am also waiting for the upcomig part.......... hope we will get to know all the story   n cybro ur not my bro u are a crow hahahaha

nice going on babu ..!

hurry to read more .........!

An A for effort, a C for the presentation. I clearly understand the trials and tribulations one has to undergo to write even a two page story and I applaud your effort as it can clearly be seen that you've tried real hard.  Only qualm I had is the "c" you use cheaply all around instead of just a plain old "she".  This isn't chat-room material that you go on present here.  Understand that there has to be a fine distinction between juvienile lingo and presenting your work of art, your baby to the public to shed their side of its opinion on.  I can feel that in time, you'd definitely end up at par with some of the better writers we have here once you accept the constructive criticism your readers give you and you WORK on improving it.  

Looking forward to the sequel (or the rest of the story if any).

In the meantime, enjoy this from The Beatles...In line with your story above:

thanx all of you for your suggestion and looking into it..and thank samsara for givin me the advice..i never thought i would be thanking you after all the fights we have gone through in another thread... i will try to improve my writing and remove errors in the next part

And the December 2001 was here again. But I knew that anjali was not coming so it was not that all exciting for me anymore. One winter morning when I woke up, the first thing I saw was familiar image standing on the roof of their house . As I have mentioned before my room is facing to the direction of theor roof with clear and straight line of sight.And it was shreya standing there. I was happy for tope that she was finally here. And to my surprise I saw anjali coming to the roof as well. I was really happy but did not do anything except for peeking at them through my curtains. Then I stayed in my table and pretended to start reading as if I did not notice them. Then I saw anjali coming up the stairs looking at me and I looked at her and gave no expression at all. After a while she signaled me to call her. So I went downstairs to call her. I talked to her and I said you are here ..what happened to your SLC? She told me that she had to quit her exams because of her health problem. I was feeling sad since she had to miss her SLC exam and happy also  because she was here. So things started on going as usual like looking at eachother from roof talking in pphone and meeting more frequently than yester years. But no official date even after 3 years of relationship. One day both of them asked if we could go out together. And we said yes. It was combined date . We were going put with girls for the first time so we had no idea where to take them what to do. In complete state of confusion we took them to the zoo. Hahahaha

 

Then I cam to know that both of them are staying in kathmandu for furhte study. I was really happy. But things between tope and shreya was falling apart because that girl had changed totally in attitude and my friend did not like that. Still he was hanging on there because of my and anjali effort to keep them together. One day when I was out with my friends I came to know that she went out with tope shreya and one another friend of mine ( not so close one). When they came back another friend was saying this that she will go out with anyone not only you. I was so pissed off at her because it was too hard for me to take her out for date because of family restrictions of her but she went easily with him. So that evening I threw every gift she gave to me , all her letters everything ( except her picture ) on her roof from tope’s roof as there house were too close. She was crying and I was really angry so I did not even care. Next morning my another best friend kale heard about all this and came to me and asked everything. Then he told me at least go talk to her whats the matter. Then he called her and set up our meeting. After meeting her I came to realize that another guy had lied her that I would also be there so she went with her. That was the first mistake I made in our relationship. I apologized to her and things started going again. She was staying in her another sisters house at baneshwor and used to come there everyweek. I also used to go and meet her after her computr classes. And all of the sudden things started changing. She was not receving my call, not calling me, ignoring me . I was equally dedicated to her as before but her dedication was ceasing and I was getting disappointed in everyother step. I asked her whats the matter but she used to say its all like before only you think I am doing that. When it was unbearable I told her ok if you are not interested anymore lets stop it here. I gave back her all her pictures that were with me and also asked her to burn mine. She did not say anything and went along. That was when my heart shattered for the first time.

 

We didn’t talk to eachother and I pretended that I  did not even care for her when she used to come there because I was really angry.

The things went on like that for two months. And here it was my oldest sister marriage. I decided to call her and shreya to my sisters marriage and gave them the invitation. Well they did not come but watched evrytihgn from there roof. That again gave life to our relationship and we patched up again. Again we were dating and as happy as before. And same thing started coming back again. She started ignoring me again, I used to go to meet her in her computer classes and one day she told me her classes are over so how are we going to meet. I said we will find out some way. But reality was she was still going to the class and just did not want me to visit her. I found out that but kept quiet. Kale and tope were there to convince me to not to leave her but try to go on. I treid again and again . On last date we went to see movie chori chori chupke chupke but things were tensed between me and he there too. While returning we did not say a word and parted. One day I Saw her in shreyas house. Since we hadnot had contact for long I told shreya to tell her I would be waiting one place so I could talk to her and she told me that she would be coming. I waited for more than an hour but she was not there. I let that one go out of my mind too. Then new year was there and shreya had gone Darjeeling to do some stuffs so she could start studying here. Anjali was looking for school over here. I was in 12. She promised that we would spend this newyear eve together. So I cancelled all my plans with friends just to be with her. And in new years eve we promised to meet at 6 p.m but till 7 she was not there, I called shreyas home and what I found out was she went to nagarkot with her family to celebrate new year and didn’t even tell me a word . I was trying to adjust and adjust but she was getting more ignorant and irresponsive. And one day I told her ok we are done for good. I cant take it anymore you go your own way and I will go mine..She was silent and I got her answer. It was just  2 days before my 12 fnal xams so I screwed all my exams………………

 

This is just beginning of what I have gone through next will be coming if you all are interested

 

ok i see whats going on. The pain is there i know but i think you are the one who started it. You should have never believed that friend of yours. Anyway you followed up but she did not. Man shit happens in life. So what else is going on. Its going to be almost a decade of your story so its kind of old but true deep n interesting love story.. i would like to know what more is going on..

gone through ur love story ... i love "love stories" ... why are they tragic ... plz some one post Love story will good ending ... like marriage and something like that ... hope teroobaau ko pani love success hoos last maa ...tara doesn't seems like happy ending when i remember the thread heading/ title ... anyways all the best ...

so whats next? all tragic story....... would like to see the ending

and ... ?

I'm sorry if I've offended you terobau but your name itself prevented me from reading and enjoying your post.

i tried to edit my username but sajha wont let me do it i have tried many times sorry mohanB but i was not thinking while i created this username and when i started thinking it was too late