Dear friends, I would like to thank everyone for reading my story. But due to unavoidable circumstances I cant continue later, I hope you enjoyed/ or (got irritated) whatever I had presented. Your comments have always encouraged me to write more.

I have already written few more parts but was reluctant to add. I somehow felt it was too personal. J hos ahilelai bhane yettikai ma bida hunchhu yo thread bata.

---------dheari dherai dherai dhanyabad to  all friends of Sajha and especially those who directly motivated by dropping comments-------

Hi Amazing:
Your story is really nice and i am so glad you chose to write it in 'sajha'. My father had a very similar story like yours (till now at least) as he spent more than 12 years in Delhi working (not as a guard but as driver, i think) but later on he chose to return to Nepal and invest in business and it worked.

But whenever i go to Delhi, i try  to visit some of his old friends who are still working as chaukidars in different locations and spend time with them and hear their stories. their struggles in life, their half -hindi- half Nepali bhasa..

thanks for the story and please continue them..

hey amazing,,the story is getting interestinh......please post the next part soon

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hey Amazing, what a tale of friendship.........

yo flashback scene bha part pani man chhuney nai raheycha .. tara timro Delhi yatra ko dardabhari kahani lai break nagari continue garana hai sathi A  :)

Amazing bro,
Silent reader bhako kya yespali chahi. Whatever you write, looks like a real story. Keep on going. I am waiting for more.
GOGOL

wonderful story Amazing. i enjoyed every word of it and eagerly waiting for the next part. i cant wait ti read the coming part. keep on going..........awesome job.

arko part pani aaisakechha  friendship ko ramro example sathi yo bhag chai........gurung sir jasta dada teacher haru harek school ma hune rahechhan...yo bhag pani ramailo laagyo....la aba delhi ko sunau na ta sathi....

sheetalb...salute to your father. Im happy to know that he has also chosen to walk 'The  Road Less Traveled' by trying his luck in business. I hope u  proved to be ideal son/daughter. I know u always make them happy, very vew ppl dare to open their private lives (including family) in open forum and u did it. Thanks for sharing though in short. Im hapy that u read my post and commented. Everything in life is worth, and the experiences worthier. Thanks for reading.

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hi dhimar1, thanks for supporting. Yr few words make me write more and more. Please stay tuned. Will post more later.

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Sathi P .-) Darda bhare kahani re hahahah......I like these sentences so much. Used to listen 'Dard bhare nagme' of Rafi, Lata, Kishore ...now u reminded me of that. Flashback was just remembering those friends. Will surely update Dard bhare hahahahhah. Thanks again.

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Gogol bro, Silent reader ko pani alaggai maja hunchha ni :-)  Tara 1 -2 shabda lekhyo bhane the person will feel happy to know that 'Ohhh usale pani mer katha padhechha yaar'----Thanks bro for reading this part too.

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Sathi, thanks. aba ek chhin ma Delhi ko kataha feri shuru garchhu. Timro school ma pani yestai Dada sir hunuhunthyo ra? kunai din timro school ko katha pani padhna paiyela bhanne aash chha :-)

Mythought jee, thanks for comment and glad that u took so much of yr time 2 finish all the parts. will post next part soon. Keep it rolling hai.



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Amazing, Its very sensitive man, specially your conversation with your Mom nearly made me cry...Eagerly waiting for the next part, I hope it comes soon

Amazing,

        its really nice how you have written the story in simple language and  portrayed the  real emotions beautifully,,,, waiting for the next part.

Amazing bro, u make me to login to sajha again yaar bcoz u know what bcoz of some reason i stopped using sajha 4, 5 months ago...but once i login to sajha before few days ur article caught my eyes and i started reading it and from that day i am so desperate to read ur article that everyday i login to sajha thinking in my mind that whether u posted new article or not...amazing bro in future if i become rich than i will surely published the book in ur article...

यो भाग पनि गहिरो, detail र रोचक रहेछ।

dashain आउन त लाग्यो amazing , तर के गर्नु, एतिखेर यो टाढाको ठाउमा आइयाछ। 

Keep rocking !!

Amazing bro,
i miss my mom a lot after reading ur post.awesomely written and heart touching.cant wait to read ur next post.....
thanks
bender

u went to aandhikhola for swimming

and u spoke abt kathmandu-dhangadhi bus carrying news papers

where  was ur place ?

_SAAJAN__, thanks for comment, happy to know u went through story. Abt mom, u r very true bro.No doubt,  hope everyone loves their mom the most, so let me dedicate that part for all the dear frenz of SAJHA n their wonderful moms.

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dhimar1, thanks again, yep bro, i tried to write in a very simple language becoz Im not a writer, just jotted down few words. Jasto manma lagyo tyahi lekhya ho. Happy that u liked it. Wil update next part soon hai. Please continue to leave comment behind hai. I need that kyaa.

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Yukon bro, once again, yr comment made me really happy. I hope this time it was not so difficult to get your username n password :-) I truly wish u to become millionaire soon :-) will update other parts soon hai :-)

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D n T bro, Thanks for comment hai. Dashain Tihar ma taas khelne bhaye come to North, we wil have good time, ki kaso? Will update other parts soon, please keep rocking with yr comment :-P

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bender bro, happy to see your comment again. So have u just made a call to mom? if not do it bro right now. Thanks for dropping few words.

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Velocity bro/sis, yea thats rite and thanks for pointin out those minute details.There are two routes to Dhangadhi from Ktm (at least), one is Ktm-Mugling-Narayangadh-Butwal, and the second one is Ktm-Mugling- Pokhara-Syangja-Tanesn-Butwal. I was waiting for second bus. Thanks for comment la

---------And Muchos Gracious to all the silent readers---
and Merci to all my ShoutBox friends who gave live feedbacks

Dear friends, I would like to thank everyone for reading my story. But due to unavoidable circumstances I cant continue later, I hope you enjoyed/ or (got irritated) whatever I had presented. Your comments have always encouraged me to write more.

I have already written few more parts but was reluctant to add. I somehow felt it was too personal. J hos ahilelai bhane yettikai ma bida hunchhu yo thread bata.

---------dheari dherai dherai dhanyabad to  all friends of Sajha and especially those who directly motivated by dropping comments-------

Once again यो  जीवनको कथा पढिदिने अनी हौसला प्रदान गरिदिने सबै साथीहरुलाई धन्यवाद

 

ब्रो, खाली धन्यबाद मात्रै फलाकिरहेर भएन -- अगाडी नी बढ्नु पर्यो -- वालिङ्गमा एक चोटी भात भ्याएको सम्झें -- हुटेलाँ के -- भ्याउन बसी हालेँ -- अब बोलाउने र स्वागत हेर्दा ज्वाईँ नै हुँ कि जस्तो लाग्या थ्यो भरे त थप्न भनेसी मर्या जस्तो गर्न थाले --- ब्रो ले नी अगाडीको कुरा थप्न भनेसी किन यस्तो गार्हो गर्या हो-- वालिङ्गनै सम्झाउने गरेर?