Wow ,Finally got to read your story.Fabulous,spotaneous except I didn't like how Uday and Deepti 's story ended.I feel sad for Neeti too.Poor girl!There r too many Ashims in this world :-( Anyway,hope to read more from you. And last ,but not the least,Kuddos to you!!

All I can say is, it was worth waiting for the final part. It took a long time to read it and I am sure it took even longer for you to write. Thank you for your time. Now, I will be searching for your previous not-so-long stories.

Post me a copy when u get published eh?;) Dun forget to sign it tho!

All characters are good in their emotional positons. Neither Ashim nor Dipti is wrong. Infact what they did turned out to be good for both the families. Awesome read. Don't agree with title though. Waiting to read more.

.Dear Gazer - It was worth the wait ( I bet this might sound utterly boring to you but couldn't help not mentioning). Initially, when you posted your story in parts, your story reminded me of the book "Hundred Years od Solitude" where the author mercilessly gave a task of keeping tracks of the characters, for his readers (I remember someone telling me that the author did it intentionally). The only difference was - he had characters with same names. I personally thought you gave a fair share to all your characters, making their existence important and real. And also, chapter Six was a big turnover as it showed shades in the characters - Deepti's nit-picking behaviour on tiny details (First few paragraphs, I found it utterly hilarious) and Uday's abrupt action (For a second, only one word raced through my mind and that was "dang" in utter surprise, LOL). I have enjoyed all your work and hope to hear more from you.

Great piece of work...thoroughly enjoyed it ..till 5th episode... 6th is for next week. Last edited: 02-May-08 04:00 PM

Hi Gazer, I am waiting for your next not-so-short story. Hope that you will post it soon.