Posted by: Sel Roti November 29, 2004
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SITARA,
Was looking forward to reading your story in the Guild. Your posts in the various threads have made good reading. I was dissappointed that your wit and bite don't transfer well to prose. Your story was a bit heavy on the cliches and light around the main character. There was so much potential there and you let it slip. Hope your future efforts are worth the read.