You have to be personal with the story if you want the readers to be personal with what they are reading. Oys, gotta commend you on being honest all the time brother. Never had a sister, but I feel like I have one everytime I read yours truly. I feel like MY worst day has arrived when I am walking with my imaginary sister and bunch of backstreet boys are passing by. Loved the ending sentence. Makes and artistic statement in an emotional storyline. Classic.