Posted by: Nepe November 10, 2004
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Shirish,
Will love to read your newer creations. I was expecting to see (actually re-see) that piece of yours. Don't keep it to yourself, hai.
A ghazal marathon like the one we had had a long time ago in Sajha would be a joy to have again.
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The piece I wrote for Devkota Jayanti is not a ghazal. However, one can see some hangover of ghazal in it - my obsession with rhyming and sher-like make-up of shloks. Jhayaaure chhanda is another element that reminds the rule of meter in ghazal.
So, with some reluctance still in my head, I am posting it.
I viewed it as a three-dimesional piece of work. Although the strength might not be equal in all three dimensions.