bhattu, the last one was great. i think you could make some points more clear and the poem would be better. what does in front of the TV signify? why do you need TV to recreate spring? somewhat unclear. but i love the idea! "i tried to recreate lust" is strangely mysterious. write more. go bukowski! sense, "Guilt" seemed too vague, pal. poetry just reads better when images are concerete but "lies cant make me a lover" is a line that transcends ambuguity. please carry on and post more. < mG is wallowing in the dungeon of writer's block>