Posted by: rameshbabu October 11, 2004
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To me, this was unorginal non-rhythmic jibberish..
"I am someone's daughter"--- Wow...How compelling.
"I have a sister. I have a family"--- No kidding? Me too.
"Family that I haven't seen for decades"--- Boo-hoo!! Cry me a river.
"I speak a language thats not mine. I eat food thats not mine"--- ....Traitor!!!
"720201920 is my social security number"---....Liar!!!
"I have friends"--- No you dont.
"In the mirror I see a complete stranger"--- How ironic! It must have taken you ages to think of that clever line.
This poem was terrible...Nescient, do us all a favor and go jump off a cliff.