मेलोडी राम्रो छ तर ठाउँ ठाउमा music को tune संग नमिले पनि जबर्जस्ति सब्द हरु बाचन गरे जस्तो लाग्यो | इन those places you could have found more appropriate words which could गो in -tune विथ द tune (लय ?) | येही मेलोडी मा सब्द अल्लि काट छाट गर्यो भने अनि अल्लि नाम चलेको मान्छेले गायो भने यो गीत लाइ मान्छेले मन पराउछन् | good luck |

you said you used 'logic express' to create the tune . Does that mean you can make the music in computer without having some real people to play the instruments for you ??