Posted by: Deep September 30, 2004
Ghazal..Tulutulu..extended version
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"So, this is an invitation from me to Deep sir for a round of a serious exchange of political views on this forum. If Deep sir is not comfortable to put his views on an open forum, I am glad to receive him on my email. " Nepe sir, I would gladly have accepted the extended invitation for serious exchange of political views, had it-the invitation-been issued with correct judgement. The word "kamred" has nothing to do with you, personally, or your political conviction. I respect whatever you believe in. Perhaps, I am also with you. My kamred is more like a compatriot, a friend who is confused with the chaos in the nation. And chautara ma baseko frustrated kamred is not you. At least I was not thinking about you when I wrote that. My kamred wants to do something positive, wants to rise above the pessimism, which I thought was the theme of your ghazal, but is challanged from all directions. The second expressions, below, was my personal experience. You don't exist in these lines. They represent me not you. Reining the tears already freed I lamented on failed commands Freeing the memories already jailed I failed on numerous escapes. "I am an open book in Sajha. I have bored many posters to death with my political ramblings in countless threads in the past. My magnum opus 'Why Republicanism for Nepal' (- http://www.sajha.com/sajha/html/column.cfm?extraid=622 ) and the citations therein still serve as witness to that. " This is irrelevant to me. "On the other hand, I am not aware of any material from Deep sir to know what kind of views he holds. His occasional outbursts does not help much. Bela bela ma sanakka sankiney bhanda badhi maile kehi bheteko chhaina. ( I am a fan of his childhood stories, but that's not what we are talking about here.). " My occasional "outburst" whatever that means are not to help you. So, if they don't then don't be disappointed. "Bela bela ma sanakka sankiney bhanda badhi maile kehi bheteko chhaina." I did not know you were looking for something. Sanakka sankine ko kura garne ho bhane Nepe sir le ma mathi ghwaplyakkai pokheko expression herda maile baru sodhe afailai "meri bassai kina sankeko ni Nepe sir yassai?" "However, I realized, from a pattern of disagreement expressed in uncharitable comments to several of my poems on this forum, Deep is deeply in anguish to tell something. " There is no disagreement so forget about the pattern altogether. What uncharitable comments? I have enjoyed almost all of your poems/ghazals. Nepe sir, You badly misjugded my intent. bhadragol kura nagaram na sir. Ma bhane Nepe sir ko ghazal bhanera hurukka hune---Nepe sir chai yattikai ufrine "bola tyo deep lai---aaja tungo launo paryo khojya ke ho telle" bhandai tyo pani sajha chautari ma---bhe na ni. "Or how about a dating ? " No thanks. Dari- Junga bhako sanga I don't feel comfortable.
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