Posted by: Nepe September 29, 2004
Ghazal..Tulutulu..extended version
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Deep Sir, Nowhere to be seen the disarming innocence of your childhood stories, seductive richness of your occasional poetic fragments and generally your image of a mature and thoughtful person. Where did they all go ? Even the epitome of politeness, our very Jira sir, seems to be at a loss. Jatatatai Kamred dekhne ke bidya jaaniyo hajur ? ******************** Jira sir, Kulukulu garera thukiye mera ghazal teso bhaye ? ******************** Here is an extended version of the old ghazal 'Timi Adeko Sanghaar' posted on Sajha some months ago. The new version can also be found at Nepalikavita.com (You don't need Nepali fonts to read it. It's on Unicode) The beauty of ghazal is that you can add new sher any time, because each sher is an independent and complete poem. That is not the case with other genre of poetry. Hail Ghazal ! - http://www.nepalikavita.com/archive/2004/August/August_12.htm
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