Posted by: enthusiast October 25, 2013
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I am not a poet and I know Rahul bhai's penmanship is good. However, if I was writing this 'gazal' I would write either
एका बिहानै उसले मलाई सरापेर गइ
यस्तो लाग्छ मिठो राग अलापेर गइ
or
एका बिहानै उनले मलाई सरापेर गईन्
यस्तो लाग्छ मिठो राग अलापेर गईन्
Its a good one though!!
Thanks