Posted by: ambrosiac March 6, 2013
Ties that bind
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Hey thank you so much for your comments and for all the silent readers. I haven't written anything for a very very long time but decided to try my hand at it because of the Story Writer contest. I tried to write something for the general nepali reader so yes it does have some 'masala'  I've been warned that sajha readers are not general nepali population so in future I will try not to do a generic one. I spent 10 minutes thinking up the plot and about an hour and half writing it out. Sorry for some typos and grammatical errors. I know I hurried a little at the end but the story does end there.

After I wrote it, the ending reminded me of videos like 'Lahure ko budi', where Lahure ko budi has affair while the husband is away, and when he is back, things are back to normal. So Vasudev, the ending is the real ending, 'and they lived happily ever after' type.
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