Posted by: Sukuchha January 3, 2013
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contrary to most peoples opinion, for me the last part ended rather abruptly. the flow was also super fast like the race of usain bolt. i liked more, earlier part where u described each scene with lots of details full of pulsating feelings. nevertheless, u have agood knack of story telling, i eagerly wait for new story.salute.