if this is not a copied story , i must say u all have done a good job, i like the girl act, she did fine with music score and voice over , good rec quality.edit is also fine, but it would have been more good ending if u would have end the story right after the closeup of the painting face from scene 5:30, with at least 5 sec of slow blak dissolve and give the credit title. anyway this was my constructive comment. keep it up !