Posted by: Cacophonix March 9, 2012
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I don't like either.
Here's my criticism:
- Don't like the colors. They dont mix well with each other.
- The nepal flag is too conspicuous. I get it we're Nepali, but dont mean we have to wear the flag on our chest everywhere.
- The message is unclear. No money, no honey. Cliche. 'where being nepali comes to us naturally...' Hmmm.
Here are some suggestions:
- Keep it simple. Make an emblem, below it write Sajha.com. Display this on chest area (upper left) in not so big graphics. Just that on the shirt.
- Ask sajhaites to come up with one short phrase that describes sajha.com for them. Print that across the center. Below that phrase in smaller font-size within brackets - sajha.com. (sajha.com). Remember font type matters. A lot.
- Get a cartoon artist to draw a simple vector art that in someway describes sajha. Doesn't have to be complicated. The simpler, the better.
- For the patriotic, a map of Nepal, divided into 5 compartments and the words S A J H A printed inside each of them.
Just some ideas. I'm sure others have more!
I don't like either.
Here's my criticism:
- Don't like the colors. They dont mix well with each other.
- The nepal flag is too conspicuous. I get it we're Nepali, but dont mean we have to wear the flag on our chest everywhere.
- The message is unclear. No money, no honey. Cliche. 'where being nepali comes to us naturally...' Hmmm.
Here are some suggestions:
- Keep it simple. Make an emblem, below it write Sajha.com. Display this on chest area (upper left) in not so big graphics. Just that on the shirt.
- Ask sajhaites to come up with one short phrase that describes sajha.com for them. Print that across the center. Below that phrase in smaller font-size within brackets - sajha.com. (sajha.com). Remember font type matters. A lot.
- Get a cartoon artist to draw a simple vector art that in someway describes sajha. Doesn't have to be complicated. The simpler, the better.
- For the patriotic, a map of Nepal, divided into 5 compartments and the words S A J H A printed inside each of them.
Just some ideas. I'm sure others have more!