Posted by: behoove_me January 31, 2012
Short story < 50 words
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 F train, midnight, just us.
"How're you" He smiles.
"Dying"
"I died 20 years ago", he hands his newspaper.
From 1991, it says under his picture - Shot dead in F train.
"Wasn't kidding"
"Me neither" I take my coat off.
Blood oozes from my chest.
Was shot minutes ago.

Keeping it under 50 words was difficult. Wish you had said 100. :)

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