Posted by: GoodAss January 9, 2012
E-LOVE IN SAJHA: SOMEDAY I SHALL BUY YOU A PIZZA (FINAL PART)
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Amazing ending...IMO though fiction such events are not unusual...Great writing...For some reason, while reading the story by mind was boggled by this particular sentence “Timro thutuno dekhauna please”.  All the imagination I had of the girl of her beauty, courage, prettiness and all those stuffs came crashing down when I saw the word "thutuno". I don't know. To me the word sounded too rough...lol...I can understand the word being used by moms and not feel the roughness but love and care but wow "Thutuno" by a young girl, in a context, where she wants to see a guy for the first time on a webcam...Damn...I am not judging anyone but wanted to write something coz I was startled. For me it would have been a big turn-off...I would have hung for phone and call it a quit...lol....just saying....
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