Posted by: Lekhak August 4, 2004
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Oys, thanks for the review homie. One of these days, I want to write a short story in your and Deep's style. My style, it seems,is getting repititious. Deep, I was very good in Nepali Vashik Shuddhata, but those sentences were hard even for me man. Gotta mellow it down a little comrade. Thanks for the good words and yeah, I think although the ending was different from my Previous ones, there seems to be some repiting theme on them. I will try to change the 'ayam' in new ones. Shaq, traded to Miami and still remembers Hollywood. Thanks for the kind words brother. Dananah, nanananah hey hey goodbye. Thanks for taking the time to go over it, it is a little lengthy. No, it ain't a true story. But 75th Infantry division's raid in France is a real one. To those who read it thanks for going through a lengthy story.
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