Great writing. You have a real talent. We need more Nepali writers like you to promote Nepal and Sauraha. Sauraha is a beautiful place and I hope that you write more stories that tell the world of how wonderful it is. I was in Sauraha 2 years ago on vacation and absolutely loved it there.

This is why I write. I wrote this story to promote Kathmandu:
http://sajha.com/sajha/html/index.cfm?threadid=90784

So I am happy to see you promote Sauraha. Yes, please write more love stories that take place in Sauraha. Inspire more people from all over Nepal to go to Sauraha. And inspire the world to come to Nepal. This will bring much needed tourism money to Sauraha and Nepal. This will be a great service. Please use your writing talent in that way. 

Also, go ahead and post your story in the Sajha literature section. Many people will appreciate your writing:
http://sajha.com/sajha/html/index.cfm?forum=283