Posted by: Cacophonix October 23, 2011
RE-incarnation explained
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Dude,

I read through your ramblings and have a few things to say.

1. PLEASE FORMAT YOUR POST! (my eye hurts). Your thoughts might garner better reception if its easier to read and idea(s) are demarcated by paragraphs. I'm not an English teacher, but you gotta trust me when I say "FORMAT YOUR POSTS".

2. Like paradox mentioned above, some elements of your post seem to be a rather defensive view of your own realizations. That's cool, but you mentioned in your post title that you were going to explain re-incarnation and not why you believe your view is right. The title implicates that everything you say is your view, so go ahead and dive right in. Don't worry about explaining yourself to readers unless it is a necessary part of your article.

3. I love your ideas and reasonings, but could you make them a bit more coherent in writing? I'm sure you understand what you are talking about but to convey that across to your audience is a task in itself.

4. Can I have whatever you're smoking? --- Just kidding :)

Please continue.
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