Posted by: jay-z August 9, 2011
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hi behoove_me,
i was intrigued by your teej article to go throught this one too, but honestly i didn't find this one to the par of the last one. May be you had written this one beforehand,
based upon your other postings, i assume that you are someone who would welcome a critique of your work whole-heartedly. here is what i think of your writing on this article,
you need to focus on the flow of thoughts, somehow i didn't find it smooth enough
many a times you have used some words just for the sake of using them.
i know its far more easier to be a critique than to be a writer. i have tried to write several times, and deleted my writings before someone else could read them. so i can tell that you are definitely a better writer than me, keep sharing other things that you've written.
i was intrigued by your teej article to go throught this one too, but honestly i didn't find this one to the par of the last one. May be you had written this one beforehand,
based upon your other postings, i assume that you are someone who would welcome a critique of your work whole-heartedly. here is what i think of your writing on this article,
you need to focus on the flow of thoughts, somehow i didn't find it smooth enough
many a times you have used some words just for the sake of using them.
i know its far more easier to be a critique than to be a writer. i have tried to write several times, and deleted my writings before someone else could read them. so i can tell that you are definitely a better writer than me, keep sharing other things that you've written.