Told u, dude is good. Oys, if you haven't already done so, do go through some of the works by Charles Schulz (Peanuts). His character development is considered the best in any cartoon strips and I could relate few of your characters development to his own old gang of Peanuts (good old Charlie Brown, Lucy, Snoopy, Schroeder etc). The way you have developed your characters; yourself, your mammu and sister and ofcourse Shivani, is really admirable. If u ask me honestly, I think there is a lot of truth to the character Shivani (compared to the RED haired girl in Peanuts). Oys sure liked the girl.