Posted by: no_quiero April 21, 2011
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Seriously guys. I posted comment in his video in youtube. I havent put any swear word. I just put advice. And this guys does not publish the comment.
- He is preaching something he won't follow. Seriously, How would a guy teach somebody a good moral lesson when he tries to cheat himself by hiding negative criticism
- he only wants to hear good thing and publish good thing about his video. Do you think such people can help nepal progress in all honesty.
As he advertised a lot of his video here in sajha, I felt it is better to tell the comment here. As I work in similar field, i easily identified such mistakes. I have always taken good with the bad. I hope my comment should be taken positively. But hiding behind and only trying to take praise will lead to nothing.
Here is kind of comment i wrote,
I think unhappen is a directorial disaster. It is a nice movie with good stories. But there are many flaws to make it UNHAPPEN ....UNREAL.
1. A college girl, opening a bonnet of a car during exam time. Seems very unrealistic. Without sounding sexist, how many girls actually open the bonnet of the car when it stalls.
2. At 2 minute 11 seconds you can actually see the shadow of cameraman with TRIPOD behind the artists.
3. Again at 2 minute 10 seconds you see shadow behind when the guy puts the BATTTERY in the car. It is BRIGHT AND SUNNY behind . Very next frame it is all dark behind. Which means A VERY LONG TIME has passed between two shots.
4. Lots of continunty error. You will find more than one example. For example, at 2 minute 43 second when guys closes the bonnet of the car there is no white van behind. But soon in the next shot when girl is shown a white van is parked.
5. At 4:37 you see two girls standing in front of building. what happened to them next second?
6. At 1 minute 37 you can again see a shadow of cameraman moving behind the girl.
movie making is a difficult art. If it is not done in right way and have too many inconsistencies it would not look real .
- He is preaching something he won't follow. Seriously, How would a guy teach somebody a good moral lesson when he tries to cheat himself by hiding negative criticism
- he only wants to hear good thing and publish good thing about his video. Do you think such people can help nepal progress in all honesty.
As he advertised a lot of his video here in sajha, I felt it is better to tell the comment here. As I work in similar field, i easily identified such mistakes. I have always taken good with the bad. I hope my comment should be taken positively. But hiding behind and only trying to take praise will lead to nothing.
Here is kind of comment i wrote,
I think unhappen is a directorial disaster. It is a nice movie with good stories. But there are many flaws to make it UNHAPPEN ....UNREAL.
1. A college girl, opening a bonnet of a car during exam time. Seems very unrealistic. Without sounding sexist, how many girls actually open the bonnet of the car when it stalls.
2. At 2 minute 11 seconds you can actually see the shadow of cameraman with TRIPOD behind the artists.
3. Again at 2 minute 10 seconds you see shadow behind when the guy puts the BATTTERY in the car. It is BRIGHT AND SUNNY behind . Very next frame it is all dark behind. Which means A VERY LONG TIME has passed between two shots.
4. Lots of continunty error. You will find more than one example. For example, at 2 minute 43 second when guys closes the bonnet of the car there is no white van behind. But soon in the next shot when girl is shown a white van is parked.
5. At 4:37 you see two girls standing in front of building. what happened to them next second?
6. At 1 minute 37 you can again see a shadow of cameraman moving behind the girl.
movie making is a difficult art. If it is not done in right way and have too many inconsistencies it would not look real .
Last edited: 21-Apr-11 04:28 PM