THis documentary is better dude....but still u suffer similar issues with your work....and don't get me wrong i am a digital cinema student and filmmaking is my area of knowledge as well......u do have many good shots in tis movie but again u use a lot of time showing them off which tends to become borring....i belive u do not need to show those scenes with audio instead use yor voice over so that viewers can still get your message and u keep them watching, which is the most important part....ani editing ma u need to spend some time redefining ....i liked the transitions but for a good flow u need to use all those good shots in a connecting pattern.....that will make it worth watching.....and again i love that ur dong all these on your already short, free hours and day offs but u could do a lot better! 
peace