good move guys ... good attempt but i found some serious falws in it . first of all the story though good lacks substance to it . ani acting was more of a kind of mission paisa acting . It didnt look real . The dialouge has lost it impact because of over use of facy words(i think its was your attempt to make it sound cool). The good part however was the direction and shooting. The picture quality and the skill of the camera man is worth to be applaud. The background sound mixing seems to have taken alot of hard word and has come up tith good results. In short i liked the whole concept of yu guys . the only reason to hold the video back is your attempt to make it sound cool rather than make is look natural. Really like you guys attempt for a short movie and hope to see more of it soon .