Werene,

Liked your story a lot. It was very sweetly written. Loved the details. I liked the innocent mood of the protoganist. It was beautiful to see Kathmandu through his eyes.

Kaji sahab is right. I think a lot of people have the experience of coming to a large American city the way the protoganist experienced coming to Kathmandu. I was imagining that the experience of seeing 'naya bus park' with the rows of busses for the protoganist must have been the same experience as I felt when I saw rows of jumbo jets in the airport in Singapore on my way to come to America.

I hope you don't mind but I didn't understand a few words. Can you give definition of the below words? I would appreciate it.

Birano - मलाई काठमान्डु एकदम बिरानो लाग्न थालेको थियो।

Hashya - सिंहदरबारअगाडि लखेटेको दृश्य आयो

is Hashya vision?

Panipadhero - अलिअलि राजनीति गर्नेलाई त पानीपँधेरोजस्तै थियो।