The second one sounds verrry confused, but it is beautiful nevertheless...

i am contributing something of my own... I hope you don't mind the intrusion

inhale,
we met
and loved,
exhale

i let out sighs
at passersby

familiar greetings
endearing lies
endless chitchat
why

do you not call
i wait right here
i understand
that you don't care

these weighted eyes
this baited breath
i wait, i wait
a wasted breath.

:(