good poem. your choice of few words would probably ruin the whole thing and don't enough credit that you deserve, but i like it... i gues it could be jharro sahitya .. chalan-chalti ma aayko bhasa.

उसको बाउको के जान्छ
गाडी बाल्चन, आगो ताप्चन
झगडा गर्छन नेता, उकास्चन जनता
पार्टी को लागि सोल्याठ-भुस्तिग्रे टाउको थाप्चन
...very wall said.