Thanks all,

santosh1984- yup i think it still applies
timer- :) its not too late
girly_gurl - thanks, ur too sweet
Grace_S - unfortunately I stopped writing, so I wonder if I can hone my talent now
PIGGY- the prodigy died :(
daum- I am glad you loved it, your encouragement keeps me going
rahulvai- No match for your talent, but thanks and I am glad you liked it
serial- thanks, i write because of readers like you :)
Nepe- very good observation, "hami" is a part of "tiniharu", we all stink yet complain about others stinking. And we should go for the remedy of stink rather than putting a mask on. :)

Thank you all for liking the poem again. The encouragement motivates me to write again. I am waiting for  other constructive and critical responses.