when someone puts in the effort, specially a commendable effort, the least you can do is compliment. If not, as they say: if you do not have anything good to say, then dont say anything at all.

I like the effort AP--I liked your last story as well. So what if the story is not original-- its the writer that makes a story click, and you definitely have that about you. Imagine if they hadnt made the Godfather because they already had so many 'mafioso' movies out there in the 50s. 

And one more thing, you are seeking publicity in whatever you do--whether it is at work, play, home or at Sajha--publicity is what makes you who you are in some one else's eyes. You start the 'publicity' train the day you are formed inside your mother's womb, and your parents proudly disclose to the whole world they are expecting this precious bundle of joy.

Having a slow day with all this rain, and stories like this make for some good time pass. waiting for the next batch please!