The story is really super. I felt like my own story. My story has already ended and we never met again but you luckyass bright future is near. I wish I could I have moment, that glance in my life but Daiba le kahile jurayena.

Very nice presentation. I read all of your story. its simply super. Some places I felt its my own, truely. I had tears on my eyes. touched my heart. Keep writing. I see some grammatical mistakes in the story but the flow of the story is like the river in the winter. Please have some guy who has good command in nepali and your story is one of the best on Sajha.

Good Luck.