Posted by: rockend December 1, 2008
eyy ni lai lai ...........eyy lai lai hehe haha!!! ni laii laiii PART 2.......!!!
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thankyou so much for all the people who went through my thread... !!! and thanks alot for ur comments...!! Well I wanted to make this thing going on.. for quite a while.. but I am sorry I think this might be the last part of the story..!!! HOpe you all will enzoie!!! IF you are disappointed with meh I am sorry to disappoint you all....!!! I didn't want to do it . But time change and ppl change so I had to..!!!

HERE IS THE LAST PART OF MERO SATHI KO TWAKEY BAU...!!! i KNOW IT WON'T BE A COMPLETE STORY AT ALL.. BUT STILL TRY TO SMILE...!!!

 

 

Part V

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36 yrs ago......!!!

It's rainy season.The weater is romantic but also he hated it as he's just a kid. He always hated dangling thing on his hands. That's why I guess he hated carring umbrella. He's a boy who is just 12 yrs old but yet everyone envy him. He's adorable and everyone is attracted by his innocent face. The school is over and he's on his way home.On his way home it started to drizzle. As he didn't have umbrella with him. He started to run so that he would be able to reach home as soon as possible before it rains cats and dogs. He runs looking at people staring at him. He finds everyone with umbrella or raincoat to protect themselves from being wet. He hated raning season as he's always wet home and always used to get scolding of him mother. As he's running he slipped and fell to the ground.

Immediately he's helped by someone nearby. He can't believe that he's helped to stand on his feets by a girl who is same to his age. But he feels greatful to the girl.

With some smile in his face he says," Thankyou!!!" And again he's ready to run. But he can't. He again tries to run but he finds himself being hold by something. He thought for while and looked back. He could see the girl smiling at him coz he's not able to move. The girl then asks him," Well you want to get sick or not ?" He replies," NO!!!"  Then the girl replies," Okey! Then I'll drop you off to ur home." He replies,"Well how did you know that I'll get sick if I run/walk in the rain." The girl replies," My mom told me that if I walk in the rain I'll be sick."

He never heard from his mother that he would be sick. Well they are on the way home sharing one umbrella. Their shoes are wet. He then says," I haven't heard my mom saying to me that I would be sick if I'll walk in the rain." With smile the girl asks," Well which way  is the one that leads to ur home?"

He used to be shy infront of girls but he don't know why he was shy. But he was surprised to himself that he was sharing an umbrella with a girl. And is talking with a girl who is really preety than the girls of his class. He then looks at the girl for while. And stares at her for a while. The girl again asks the boy,"Hey, which way is ur home? Huh? And pokes the little innocent boy's on his left cheek. The boys didn't utter any word of pain but feels his left cheek. Then the girls start to walk as she didn't get any answer. The boy was very quick to reply to the girls action. "Hey you'll be responsible if I am sick. And you are going the right way, could you wait I am comming? The girl replies," No, I can't wait. If you want the shade of the umbrella from the rain then run.I saw you running a while ago before I helped you to stand up." The girl giggles. She tries not to laugh but she can't stop from laughing.It again started to rain heavily. It was little calm for a while. Then the boy had no option than to run and catch the girl to share the umbrella with her.

The girl then smiles seeing the boy run to her to share the umbrella. The boy also smiles back to the girl. But the boy don't know why he's smiling. He's just replying back the smile I guess.

Now it's time for the boy to say goodbye. They are now  no far away from the boy's house. Then the boys disturbs the silence,"Thankyou so much. Well from tomorow I'll carry my own umbrella with me." Then the girl replies,"If you forget to bring ur umbrella then remember me." The girl smiles.

Then the boy asks,"Hey what's ur name?" The girl replies,"Pratima gurung" The boy then says,"Nice name, I am kamal." "Pratima this is my home now I have to go. See you tomorrow." Pratima then holds Kamal's hand and stops him. Kamal asks, "Anything wrong?" Pratima replies, " NO" then give a gentle kiss on Kamal's cheek. Kamal is confused and don't know what to do. He felt the gentle touch of the sweet lips of Muna.

It was his first kiss of his life and he was confused and dumb. Pratima waved her hands to say goodbye with gesture. Kamal with strange expression in his face waves his hand back.

Then Kamal shares his experience of the first kiss of his life with his mom. His mom says, "When someone kisses you on ur cheek and forehead, it means the person cares about you." Kamal replies, "Are you sure." Kamal's mom replies back,"Yesh! that's why I always kiss you before you wake up and after you go to sleep on ur forehead."

Kamal feel kind of unusual feeling on his cheek. He keeps on feeling if there is something on his cheek or not. He keeps on feeling his cheek while he's eating , doing his homework. Then all of sudden at around 8:00 Pm after having dinner Kamal goes to his mom's room and kisses her. "I came to kiss you because I care about you. And mom is it true that when someone walks in the rain he/she'll be sick?" Kamal's mom replies," Yes! But you always throw the umbrella before you go to school.ANd thankyou for ur sweet and lovely kiss." Kamal goes to sleep saying goobye for the old day.

to be continued.............!!!

this is it.. I am not going to continue anymore.....!!!!

I know the story is not complete...!! to make you all feel it's complete I am gonna give every details of the characters.. !!!

what happens to pratima and kamal?

THis is the last and the first meeting of kamal and pratima. Kamal never was able to meet pratima again. He then onwards never forgot to take his umbrella. Kamal always used to remember Pratima when it always rained.

what happened to Pratima?

Pratima was hospitalized. She was in hospital for 3 years struggling to get a new life. Pratima died in hospital struggling with her life to survive. She got anemia and the other disease was related to brain. He lost her meomory. Kamal saw the dead body of Pratima and was shocked to hear her death when he was in grade 9.

What happened next...?

kamal passed his SLC in first division and went to college. He fell in love with a girl named Srijana Shrestha while he was doing his ISC first year. THey had a sweet and lovely love life going on...!!!

How long did the love last...?

It was a long long love story.. They both loved each other more than themselves. IT's said that every good things come to an end. In the same way there was a full stop for the beautiful blooming love story . Srijana died at the age of 26. The doctor told that she is suffering from  a disease that they weren't able to find out. Before her death Srijana was half paralized for about 6 months. ONly her left part of the body would move. Doctors told Kamal that that was the other effect of the main disese that they weren't able to find. Doctors even told that Pratima would be toally palarized and wouldn't be able to to anything by herself. Kamal became an alcholic after the death of his better half" Srijana Shrestha"

what happened next...?

Kamal's parents talked with Kamal and they told they would support him in anyway they could to start a new life. He give him alot suggestion and finally Kamal's parents were able to bring Kamal back on the track they wanted.kamal then wanted to start a new life again. He wanted to make her girl Srijana happy in the heaven. He married to a girl named Muna Thapa. Muna reminded Kamal of his first innocent love of his life" Muna Gurung". Life went on well with Kamal and with time Kamal got changed.

What was the next drama...??

Kamal got new job and he had a new wife "Muna Thapa". Muna would remind Kamal of his first love story of his life " Muna Gurung". Kamal had new friends and he changed with time as every normal people. He now had a circle of people who loved gambling and drinking. Kamal's never everyday schedule was get together in his friends house drink and gamble. Kamal's wife gave birth to a baby girl. Kamal became a father at the age of 29.

what happened to the new baby girl...?

She went to a nearby school. She was talented and was my best friend. SHe grew up and started to learn many things. She came to be known of his father activities. Sita was phychologically effected girl. She used to tell meh she always had nightmares while she's sleeping.

What really happened to Sita... how did she got hurt...??

Kamal doesn't work but his wife Muna works in an office and runs the family. Kamal has been looking for job  but he didn't find any. He became frustated and started to again be an alcholic. "Fight night" remember the first chapter.. That night. Muna was trying to avoid herself from being hurt by ruthless Kamal Bahadur who had no heart what so eva. And was trying to grab the gold necklace that Muna was wearing. Muna didn't want to give him her necklace  that why there was a fight going on. Sita wanted to save her mom from her mean stone hearted father. Sita pushed his father so that he wouldn't be able to hit her mom. Then Muna told Sita to go to her room. But Sita didn't want to go coz her father would do anything at anytime. Kamal as he stood on his feet  and had a wooden stick on his hand. Sita was infront of her mom.  Kamal had no feeling to his lil girl and her mom. He started to him them with the stick that he was holding on his hand. Muna tried to save her lil gurl from being hurt but all her effort was in vain. She finally was able to get something to hit the monstor Kamal. Kamal fell to the groung unconscious. Muna called the police and told every single detail. And took Sita to the hospital.

 

why did I cry....??

I came to know that my friend Sita has been getting therapy from the doctor 2 times a month since  she was 10 yrs old.ANd she told me that doctor told her to write diary coz it would help her alot. And I came to know that the diaries were a part of the therapy. All the details she told meh about the fight night was horrible and scary.

Where am I now...??

I was in United States now I am back in nepal to publish my book. " My father villain" It's related to the life of my friend Sita.

What happened to the diary that I took away from Sita's library..??

I finally got chance to read it after 6 yrs. I read it on the way to Nepal in the plane. Every single thing mentioned on the diary were sad . There was nothing happy that I would be able to mention out here. Every single page were full of tears. The diary only consisted of 2 yrs of her life from 17-19 yrs. I asked Sita if she still writes diary or not ? I was glad she did mention my name in her diary.

what was the reply...??

SHe told me she burned few of the diaries she wrote in the past on her last b'day.

what happened to Sita's Mom..??

Muna now take cares of her lovely sweet girl who is on the bed forever. Muna is working in an organization and works in a bank too. Muna kicked her husband Kamal from his house.

what did kamal d0 later...??

Kamal became a beggar.. He begged for money on the street. And with the money he got he drinks alcohol. kamal died on the road when a car hit him. Kamal was drinking totally drunk and was walking on the middle of the street making it hard for the people to drive.

 

want to know about me ..??

I went to US after my +2. I am now an engineer. I am married now.....!!

 

I still know the story is incomplete...!!! I want you all to fill the gap urself where ever you find it incomplete..!! thankyu..!!!

THis may be my last meeting with all in sajha ...!!!

THankyou all for ur support..!!!

If you find any mistake you may keep it with you .... THankyou...!!! -XD

The End...!!!!!!!!

 

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