Hello,

Because you asked for honest feedback , I am going to tell you how I felt about your piece. I think you do have some hidden written skills but they need to improved a little. I think your sentences are too long and heavy with words. I think breaking them down into more than one sentence and conveying only 1 thing in one sentence would make it more understandable.  When a sentence is too long and is heavily worded, it loses its charm and becomes less interesting. (Atleast to me, maybe I am challenged??). And from one pararaph to another, I could not see the link, and to be truthful did not understand what your article was about, what was the theme? But I do see that with some more practice, you would write very well! :) (Though I am not an expert. lol) Bravo! Keep writing.