..(yawnssssssssssss) i wasn't actually sure whether it was a fiction, a fiction in making or a shriek of self-righteousness in writer's part. wait...so all the characters are embedded or they're in disguise??? where're all the actions????$#?? honestly, this piece is totally NOT obvious.would it be weird for you if you'd made it a bit more comprehensible. no worries,again it's a matter of taste i guess.:) no doubt, there's a silly sort of "interesting parts" in these paragraphs.your struggle to convey your vision to the readers is very much visible.must say your quest of being different everytime is commendable.
it's always a pleasure to read your work.keep them coming.