Ha Ha. That was hilarious. Here are my suggestions.

plus point: It's good to hear that some of the girls are trying to change the male-dominated rap industry of Nepal.

Negative points:  There are many of 'em and listed as below.

Beat: It sounded like a slow song fast forwarded in a cassette player. The girl singing "Yo Yo Here I come" Jez she should've kicked out of the band.

Music: It was just below average. I wouldn't blame the musician as a whole on this song.

Music Video: What the hell is that? I couldn't stop laughing. I would rate -5/10 for the music video. If you can't do graphics, then try to be simple.  The choreography sucked big time. I could make a good powerpoint presentation than that video, I swear god. It looked worse than babapapa cartoon.

Dress up: What's up with the dress up? Do you really listen to rap music? It looks like that you cut a decent shirt into shirt without sleeves and started wearing 'em for the music video. 

Overall, the song and music video sounded like a school rhyme sang by bunch of 5th graders. My point is that you don't have to be rapper to be popular in music industry in the world so stop whinining and don't make people laugh at us with these low F-graded rap, please. I am not trying to be rude here but reality hurts.

Peace

Sirus