Posted by: Superhero June 18, 2008
Molded: An Ode To Our Parents/Guardians (The Ones Who For Us Delve)
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Samsaraji, I've never read such intense poem before. So concise, so compact, and yet so visual. These are the things which are very self-evident, but always ignored.You truly are gifted. I wonder why you keep your creative chamber(literary) idle most of the time. You should activate it more often.
The poem has more punch in the beginning than in the later verses. The first verse, exactly my thoughts Samsaraji.

"Ah, all our human lives spent being cast and molded to fit in

A plaster applied to an unfinished product camoflaging itself

Nothing so much that we ask for ourselves from within

But brought about solely by the ones who on our behalf delve"

Admirer of your many personalities.

P.S. You know you are lucky tonight. Superhero is in good mood. Otherwise not every poem is going to get this much attention.




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