Posted by: chicagoan May 26, 2008
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Crazy ji,

Although I have had some minor reservations with some of your past writings but this time, oh my god, you have really written an incredible story! I cannot stop myself but salute you for such a fine creation! The story is flawless, it moves so smoothly, the suspense is held till the end, you were so good in confusing us in thinking Sajal was actually having an affair with Geeta while all the while the truth was something else! And yes it is a pretty bold story although the happentance is not out of the ordinary!

Thank you so much crazy ji......in all human selfishness, I would have liked to see Neelu living a fulfilled life but that would have been an injustice to the story itself...last but not the least, the timing of the ending could not have been better!

Please keep on writing such wonderful stories...it adds some spices to our otherwise regular and mundane life here in the US :-)

Thank you

Chicagoan

 

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