Awww thank you guys..... ty girlygurl fortunefaded and sheetalb. By the way fortunefaded I am really sad that you omitted your constructive remarks. I was highly appreciative of your sincere criticism honest and true. One thing is for sure, you cannot have higher expectations from the amateur storywriters like me.But i really liked your comment and hope you will repost it. Sincere criticism always motivates a writer to write with more passion and more delligence. I will drop more of my strange stories soon..

Yours sincerely,

Coolcetrix