Jhyalincha,   neither am I nitpicking nor am i trying to be an editor.I already said that I did like the story very much and eagerly waiting for the remaining parts to be posted..I greatly appreciate Saja gazer's ability.I just wanted to highlight few points and I don"t think that it gave a sense of attacking the story negatively.Don't we give suggestions to our family and friends? I think its good to enrich a person with appropriate informations if u have it and u think it would make change in someone's effort.I can nowhere write like Sajha Gazer and really applaud his latent. Please don't take it negatively. I could have sent him an email but as Iam new to this site I didn't know that we could do so.I would like to apologize if it hurt anyone's feelings.And Saza Gazer, please post the remaining parts soon. We are eagerly waiting for it.