gazer bro,
you hit the right chord this time. i realize that it's neither an extraordinary saga of some smarty pants nor a very ordinary one of an average. you found the common meeting point. congratz.  many of us readers can relate to the struggle and the nature of the characters and that's why the overwhelming reception you're getting and you deserve every bit of it. way to go..

Oh and I thought i somehow knew where this story is leading towards and where the characters are going to meet through my gut feeling until you introduced this fifth character Neeti...someone's gonna get hurt really bad I can tell you :P

eagerly waiting for the last part.